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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:39 pm

my 1st poem :
Memories from Heaven
Spoiler:
"Remembering you...
Makes me smile
When you were beside me
When you saw me
When you called me
It was the best moment that I've ever got

My tears was filled my eyes when you're gone
My hope was gone too with your leaving
I can't stand on your shoulders again
Memories of you always come and fade away

I can't touch your body any more
I can't hear your voice any more
I can't see your face any more
I can't hold you any more

But I know...
You always protect me, see me and guide me
From the Heaven.."


My first post... Hope you enjoy it Smile
RubYay


My third poem :
Berontak
Spoiler:
"Dalam diam aku bicara
Dalam sepi aku berteriak
Berusaha melepaskan diri
Dari rantai yang membelenggu

Aku tak sanggup lagi menahannya
Aku tak sanggup lagi menanggungnya
Aku tak kuasa lagi untuk bertahan
Aku tak kuasa lagi untuk berdiam

Aku ingin bebas
Aku ingin lepas
Bebas seperti burung di angkasa
Lepas seperti merpati di udara

Biarkanlah aku pergi
Mencari jati diri
Guna mengisi ruang hati
Yang selama ini hilang tiada arti"

Huft.. akhirnya Yuki ngepost poem ke-3!!! Sweat
maaf jika karya ini terasa aneh untuk para readers...
kritik dan saran selalu Yuki nanti Ocha


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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia on Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:11 am

"Memang anak OPORI kalau bikin puisi rata-rata temanya selalu tentang kematian ya" tawa Kuro. Haha




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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:26 am

Eto?? Hontou ni????
hehehe... habis yuki dapet inspirasi poem ni setelah Sasuke tahu tentang kematian Itachi.. (naruto shippuuden-red)
Karena yuki sangat mengagumi Itachi-senpai.. maka yuki membuat poem ini.. Hontou?

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Post by kuroro on Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:41 am

nice
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Post by Zamrullah on Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:45 pm

saya jadi sedih deh... T^T
Itachi meninggal T^T
Khukhukhu
karyanya bagus ya Sweat

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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:15 pm

arigatou kuroro Bow

Iya zamru.. sayang sekali itachi-taichou harus meninggal... Pray

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Post by emasmurni on Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:07 pm

Udah lama gk ngeliat member bikin poem sejak sang admin bikin thread sendiri

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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Thu Sep 02, 2010 1:21 pm

emasmurni wrote:Udah lama gk ngeliat member bikin poem sejak sang admin bikin thread sendiri

hoho hbsnya yuki cuma bisa bkin poem... Laughing

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Post by kuroro on Fri Sep 03, 2010 10:28 am

Fuyuki Akihito wrote:
hoho hbsnya yuki cuma bisa bkin poem... Laughing
ditunggu poem2 lainnya ya yuki
saya sih cuman pembaca saja
nggak pernah bikin baik poem maupun fanfic

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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:55 am

kuroro wrote:
ditunggu poem2 lainnya ya yuki
saya sih cuman pembaca saja
nggak pernah bikin baik poem maupun fanfic
okay kuroro-san.. tapi tergantung ma mood yuki ya... Khukhukhu

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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:17 am

"Sakit dan perih
Itulah yang kurasa
Dihina dan dimaki
Itulah yang kuterima

Aku dijadikan mainannya
Aku dijadikan bahan tawaannya
Aku hanya diam
Tak dapat membalas

Aku muak dengan semua ini
Aku benci dengan hal ini
Aku ingin membunuhnya
Aku ingin dia lenyap tak berbekas

Aku hanya diam
Aku hanya membisu
Ketika dia tenggelam
Dalam malam yang kelabu

Maka tak salah
Bila ini kulakukan
Maka tak heran
Bila ini kuperbuat"

Khu khu khu.. akhirnya ini poem kedua yuki...
Tapi yuki bingung judulnya apa.. ada saran??? Ara?
Kritik dan saran masih diterima... Hontou?

Hope you enjoy it Laughing

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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia on Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:09 am

DI-MERGE DENGAN MEMORIES FROM HEAVEN

Alasan : Biar gak begitu banyak thread, tolong kalau puisi digabung aja, thx




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Post by Zamrullah on Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:58 am

perasaan semua poemnya ya yuki-chan sedih semua! Ahaha
coba bikin yang lebih gembira Wild
tapi kalo menurutku bagus2 aja! Sweat

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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:48 pm

Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote:DI-MERGE DENGAN MEMORIES FROM HEAVEN

Alasan : Biar gak begitu banyak thread, tolong kalau puisi digabung aja, thx
Hm,, iya deh.. gapapa.. Ahaha

Zamrullah wrote:perasaan semua poemnya ya yuki-chan sedih semua! Ahaha
coba bikin yang lebih gembira Wild
tapi kalo menurutku bagus2 aja! Sweat
Hm,, yuki ga bgitu pinter klo bkin poem yg gembira...
Erm...

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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia on Sun Sep 05, 2010 6:28 pm

"Gak masalah, OPORI ini memang membernya semua suasana hatinya pada suram, jadi selalu bikin yang temanya kematian" tawa Kuro. Haha




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Post by kuroro on Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:58 am

Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote:"Gak masalah, OPORI ini memang membernya semua suasana hatinya pada suram, jadi selalu bikin yang temanya kematian" tawa Kuro. Haha
ralat: OPORI ini memang emperornya suasana hatinya paling suram

btw buat judul, saya mengajukan "di balik tirai"
*nggak nyambung*

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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:45 pm

hoho.. arigatou kuro-niisan..
ntar yuki bkin lagi deh... Tring

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Post by Fuyuki Akihito on Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:48 pm

"di balik tirai" kyknya ga nyambung sama skali deh kuroro san.. Sweat

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