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Post by Watari Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:22 pm

When is the next chapter coming out da ze...?

I want to know what happens...!
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Post by Prinny Prinnies Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:33 pm

Watari wrote:When is the next chapter coming out da ze...?

I want to know what happens...!

setelah spoiler dibenerin langsung saya release da ze.. Very Happy
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Post by Watari Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:37 pm

Awesome...!

I await the next installment to this exciting tale da ze...!!
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Post by emasmurni Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:47 pm

Kalo gitu harus nunggu ampe hari Senen dong. Yah harus bersabar untuk humor deh.
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Post by celia Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:10 pm

[fanfic] Oporier: Raise of the dark emperor - Page 2 466832 ada surat alaynya, bwahahahahah!!

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Post by emasmurni Sun Jun 13, 2010 10:20 am

Itu bukan saya yang nulis lho soalnya saya gak bisa bahasa alay.
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Post by Prinny Prinnies Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:54 pm

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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:54 pm

"Akhirnya chapter baru datang juga!!! AWESOME!!!" teriak Kuro.

"Kelihatannya nanti bakalan nambah satu karakter baru, karena partnernya Yan-Erald, bakalan saya suruh join ke forum ini juga, mantep kan?" kata Kuro.
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Post by Yuu Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:32 pm

FFFFF. My grammar PHAILS there. OPLZ. Dan apa-apaan itu remake Titanic? Bhuh
Haha Fei bisa kayak gitu? OMGZORZ! di rl dia selalu komplain atas tatapan mata saya yang katanya menakutkan oTL

LANJUTKAN! Haha
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Post by emasmurni Mon Jun 14, 2010 6:07 pm

"Yep, yer right.. ne... bagaimana kalau kita melakukan ini.", ajak sambil menarik tangan BloodBlossom.

Nama Yuu-san gk ada

"Like hell i know... itulah yang kamu sebut dengan wanita dewasa, selalu melakukan hal-hal yang aneh, seorang loli tidak akan pernag melakukan hal-hal seperti ini."

Spelling "pernah" salah jadi "pernag"

Sisanya is excellent and hilarious. I'm very satisfied with my character.
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Post by 卐 Danuve 卐 Mon Jun 14, 2010 6:26 pm


Cerita yang sangat menarik. Saya harap anda bisa melanjutkan ceritanya dengan baik tapi ada sedikit kekurangan.

  • Atas nama dewa Aizu, menurut saya ini tidak ada hubungannya dengan loli yang jadi ciri khas Kuro-sama. Saya rasa In the name of Holy Loli Kingdom Lolitannia akan lebih cocok karena Kuro-sama juga sering menggunakannnya.
  • Kuro-sama tidak pernah mempercayakan apapun pada Erald-kun dikarenakan sifatnya. Jadi ini terasa janggal untuk saya.


Tertanda,

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Post by Prinny Prinnies Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:09 pm

卐 Danuve 卐 wrote:

Cerita yang sangat menarik. Saya harap anda bisa melanjutkan ceritanya dengan baik tapi ada sedikit kekurangan.


  • Atas nama dewa Aizu, menurut saya ini tidak ada hubungannya dengan loli yang jadi ciri khas Kuro-sama. Saya rasa In the name of Holy Loli Kingdom Lolitannia akan lebih cocok karena Kuro-sama juga sering menggunakannnya.
  • Kuro-sama tidak pernah mempercayakan apapun pada Erald-kun dikarenakan sifatnya. Jadi ini terasa janggal untuk saya.


Tertanda,

卐 Danuve 卐



1st point: Aizu adalah god of eye yang grant Kuro-sama mendapatkan power semacam geiss. Atas nama dewa aizu adalah spell terpenting untuk mengexecute kekuatannya tersebut. what kind of power which dont have a requirement.

2nd point: I dont know well about Kuro... i just used his ID and create my own story with their character's perspective which shown by their posts.

thanks for comment Smile

@Yuu

grammar... which one? i'll fix em...

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thanks for correction.. fixed~


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Post by Yuu Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:03 pm

"Okaaaii.. lets headed to ze MINEz!!"

Screw it. I speak good English besides Lolspek.
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Post by Prinny Prinnies Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:18 pm

Yuu wrote:"Okaaaii.. lets headed to ze MINEz!!"

Screw it. I speak good English besides Lolspek.

so what.. u cant defeat kamisama afterall.. ahahahaha!!

i need u to fail yer engrish 1 or some..

/jk

*fixed*
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Post by Prinny Prinnies Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:09 pm

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Chapter 6: A spy and a wolf


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chapter ini sedikit ceritanya karena hanya berisi flashback~
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Post by Yuu Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:23 pm

Vooi~

Mengharukan sekali sejarahnya Knowledge(?) brothers..
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Post by emasmurni Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:42 pm

"Lalu? seakrang bagaimana... keputusanmu apa?", tanya kakek S~kun kembali.

Spelling "sekarang" jadi "seakrang"



BloodBlossom sadar dari pingsannya setlah di sadarkan oleh Kazuki.

Spelling "setelah" salah jadi "setlah"

Sekedar mau nanya, kenapa anda pake kata Srigala tapi bukan Serigala?

Maaf kalo saya ini cerewet, saya cuma mau ngecorrect spelling doang.
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Post by Prinny Prinnies Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:45 pm

@emasmurni

ntar gw correct deh... wkawkkaw.. maklum bahasa indonesia gw pas-pasan di raport wkakwakw..
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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:53 pm

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Post by Prinny Prinnies Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:28 pm

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Post by Yuu Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:44 pm

Ce-chan muncul juga..kapan pacarnya?

Walah si Pascal sama Putra. Klo ada adegan kayak gitu benernya saya sparkly eyes fujoshi mode bukan nembakin rocket launcher. gapapalah! This chapter worth a good laugh Hehe
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Post by Prinny Prinnies Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:12 pm

@yuu

haha kalau anda malah sparkling eyes... nanti adegan itu ga ada abis2nya.. yang ada pengarangnya muntah2 duluan.

ps: fix for line error, ternyata fatal juga copas dari mic.word ke sini.. line errornya parah wkkwkw..
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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:26 pm

BRAVO


"Anda pembuat fanfic jenius seperti biasa... Watari mau mati ya, hohoho" kata Kuro. Kya~!
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Post by emasmurni Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:26 pm

Suster gendut jelek dan galak itu kemudian ngeloyor pergi ke ruangan atas. Sementara itu Girugamesh masih tampak gemetaran setelah dilabrak oleh suster tadi. Yuu hanya menahan tawa melihat Girugamesh ketakutan, sedangkan BloodBlossom dan Kazuki hany terdiam.

kata "hanya" jadi "hany"

“Kami sedang bersiap-siap untuk menuju kota Arcadia desu~.”, jawanb S~kun dengan santai.

Kata "jawanb" salah

“Yupz, kalau kalian belum
mempunya ID Card, silahkan anda registrasi terlebih dahulu.”, kata wanita itu memberikan saran.

Kata "mempunyai" jadi "mempunya"

“Bawel…!”, bentar S~kun dengan nada marah.

kata "Bentak" jadi "Bentar"

ANOTHER SPECTACULAR AND HILARIOUS STORY FROM YOU, YOU'RE REALLY A GREAT WRITER
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Post by yokaroumon Sun Jun 27, 2010 11:56 am

lol...

ada team rocket team kompor...
lol...
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