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Post by Ayumu Yurihana on Sun May 23, 2010 6:46 pm

besok saya tes, ada isu yang beredar suruh buat teks bahasa inggris. saya udah buat, nah, mohon dikoreksi soalnya saya ga pande bhs inggris. sayaaa mohoooooooooooon huweeeee Cry
ini teks nyaaa....

teks:

Watching Anime

My hobby is watching anime. Anime is Japan cartoon. I prefer cartoon rather than Western cartoon. Maybe, Japan cartoon has something that looks different. That why I love it. But, I’m not like it when I must wait for watch an anime. Because I must download it and it takes several hours, depend on my speed internet connection. And I’m not like waiting. “Waiting is wasting for people like me” that quote I get out of Naruto, one of many Japan cartoons.
Anime has many genres. There are school life (tells about many things that related to school, story in the school), horror (tells about many things that have a purpose to makes everyone who watch it will be afraid), girl anime (tells about girl story), boy anime (tell about boy story), and many more. I always watch anime when I have times to do it. Oftentimes, anime has precious things that we can learn and would be a new directive in our lives.
My favorite anime was Kimi ni Todoke. ‘Kimi ni Todoke’ in English mean ‘Reaching You’ or ‘From Me to You’. The story was about the girl who called Sadako. Although, her name was Kuronuma Sawako, not Sadako. Everyone called her Sadako because when she was in playgroup, her friend made a mistake with called her Sadako. So everyone imitate her and called Sawako, Sadako.
When the story began, Sawako didn’t have any friend. Everyone avoided her. There are many rumors about her. The rumors said that she could called evil spirit from the other world, the other dimension. And whoever who saw Sawako’s eyes in three seconds, would have bad lucks in a week.
Everyone in Sawako’s school, Kitahoro High School, avoided her except a fresh and easygoing guy named Kazehaya Shouta. He never treats Sawako like everyone treats her. He treats Sawako like everyone else. He also never believe about the rumors about Sawako. When Kazehaya meets Sawako, Kazehaya always accost her like nothing happened, like he accost to his friends. That made Sawako felt happy.
We can conclude that the author, Karuho Shiina, pair Sawako and Kazehaya as a couple. Longer time, Sawako has more and more friends. And the rumors about her disappeared. Everyone treat Sawako like a normal girl and sometimes they give compliments to her. Finally, Sawako could broke down the great wall between her and her friends. Thanked to Kazehaya who helped her.
Kimi ni Todoke has many precious things that we can learn. For example, we mustn’t avoid our friends just because a rumor that we still can know the truth. And don’t judge a book by its cover. My favorite quote in Kimi ni Todoke is from Sawako. She said, “Do a good deed everyday.”
Maybe, there are many people who think that watching anime has many bad effects. Many people think “What can we get out of it? What’s the point of it?” But, watching anime as a hobby substantively just needs something that entertains us. I think that what we do as a hobby just need interesting things and entertains us. But, it can be more good if we can take the good effect from it.
In reality, my hobby, watching anime, has many good effects for me. It makes me learn from what the authors want to say to our future. Watching anime also improves my English skill. Because, what I saw was use English language. I hope, we always think that everything can have many good effects.

mohon maaf, saya memang ga bakat. ini juga bikin buru2
jadi mohon dikoreksi
makaasiiiih~

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Post by Kazuki on Sun May 23, 2010 7:04 pm

paragraf pertama kalimat kedua "I prefer cartoon rather than Western cartoon"
kalau kayak gitu jadinya "saya lebih suka kartun dari pada kartun barat"
jadi harusnya "I prefer Japanese cartoon rather than Western cartoon"

trus di kalimat "Because I must download it and it takes several hours"
menurut saya kayaknya lebih bagus kalau jadi "Because I must download it and that will takes several hours"

di kalimat "(tells about many things that related to school, story in the school)"
kayaknya lebih bagus "(tells about many things that related to school, or story in the school)"

di bagian "except a fresh and easygoing guy named Kazehaya Shouta"
maksid dari fresh itu apa? fresh guy?

sekian dari saya kalau ada yg salah mohon maaf

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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia on Sun May 23, 2010 7:19 pm

"Ini sedikit dari saya..." kata Kuro.

Seharusnya Anime is Japanese cartoon. Bukan Japan cartoon.

Bukan I'm not like it tapi I don't like it.

Because I must download it and it takes several hours, depend on my speed internet connection.
ini diganti jadi
Because it takes several hours to download it, depends on the speed of my internet connection

"Nanti saya beritahu lagi mana yang salah. Cuma kalau soal grammar gini lebih jago Watari-jiisan memang" kata Kuro.




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Post by Ayumu Yurihana on Sun May 23, 2010 8:03 pm

wuaaaa....
arigatoooou kuro san!! Pachi
hiksuuuu RunCry *nangis terharu*
sangat berarti... hohoho....terimakasih sekali lagi Hontou?

kalo yg lain mau nambahin.. ditunggu.. hohoho~ Khukhukhu

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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia on Sun May 23, 2010 11:35 pm

"Saya lagi bosan gak ada kerjaan jadi saya coba edit semuanya. Mungkin masih banyak yang salah tapi paling tidak sudah lebih baik dari yang tadi" kata Kuro.

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Anime and Its Function

My name is (real name here) and my hobby is watching Anime. What is Anime? Anime is cartoon from Japanese. I prefer Anime than Western Cartoon.Why? Because Western cartoon is based on the idea that "story is the most important thing" and because of that, the artwork doesn't looks like a real human. But in Anime, artwork and story are both important, that's why they make the character looks like a real human. One thing that I hate the most is when I need to wait until I finish downloading the Anime. With Indonesia's Internet
Connection's speed I need to wait for about 2 hours just for 1 episode. And I don't like waiting. “Waiting is wasting for people like me”, I quote that from the ending song of Naruto, one of most favorite Anime nowadays.

Anime has many genres. There are school life (tells about many things that related to school, story in the school), horror (about ghost, or maybe murder case), girl anime (tells about girl story), boy anime (tell about boy story), and many more. I always try to watch anime when I have times to do it. Oftentimes, anime has precious things that we can learn and would be a new directive in our lives.

One of my favorite anime is Kimi ni Todoke. ‘Kimi ni Todoke’ in English mean ‘Reaching You’ or ‘From Me to You’. The story is about a girl who called Sadako. Although, her name was Kuronuma Sawako, not Sadako. Everyone called her Sadako because when she was in playgroup, her friend made a mistake with called her Sadako. So everyone imitate her and bully her by calling her Sadako.

When the story began, Sawako didn’t have any friend and everyone avoided her. There are many rumors about her. The rumors said that she could called evil spirit from the other world, the other dimension. And whoever who saw Sawako’s eyes in three seconds, would have bad lucks for a week.

Everyone in Sawako’s school, Kitahoro High School, avoided her except a fresh and easygoing guy named Kazehaya Shouta. He never treats Sawako like everyone treats her. He treats Sawako like everyone else. He also never believe about the rumors about Sawako. When Kazehaya meets Sawako, Kazehaya always accost her like nothing happened, like he accost to his friends. That made Sawako felt happy.

We can conclude that the author, Karuho Shiina, pair Sawako and Kazehaya as a couple. After some time, Sawako has more and more friends, and the rumors about her disappeared. Everyone treat Sawako like a normal girl and sometimes they give compliments to her. Finally, Sawako can break down the great wall between her and her friends. Thanks to Kazehaya who helped her.

We can learn many precious things fron Kimi ni Todoke. One of them is, we mustn’t avoid our friends just because a rumor that we still can know the truth. And don’t judge a book by its cover. “Do a good deed everyday”, that's a quote from Sawako and also my favorite quote from Kimi ni Todoke.

Lots of people think that watching anime is just an useless thing to do. But actually, it's not like that at all. Anime can teach us lots of thing that we can't learn from school. Well, it's allright to watch Anime as your hobby as long as you don't forget to study and pray. Anime can becomes both negative or positive thing depends on our action.

Me myself thinks that Anime give lots of positive things to me. One of them is, I can improve my English skill. Why? Because Anime that I download from anime use English as subtitle and sometimes they also change the Japanese voice into an English one.




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Post by Ayumu Yurihana on Tue May 25, 2010 5:22 pm

Kazuki wrote:paragraf pertama kalimat kedua "I prefer cartoon rather than Western cartoon"
kalau kayak gitu jadinya "saya lebih suka kartun dari pada kartun barat"
jadi harusnya "I prefer Japanese cartoon rather than Western cartoon"

trus di kalimat "Because I must download it and it takes several hours"
menurut saya kayaknya lebih bagus kalau jadi "Because I must download it and that will takes several hours"

di kalimat "(tells about many things that related to school, story in the school)"
kayaknya lebih bagus "(tells about many things that related to school, or story in the school)"

di bagian "except a fresh and easygoing guy named Kazehaya Shouta"
maksid dari fresh itu apa? fresh guy?

sekian dari saya kalau ada yg salah mohon maaf

arigaaaatooooouuuuu kazuki kun!!!!! Kya!
rep + buat andaaaa!! Thumb
saya lupa yg fresh guy itu ahhahaha
kalo ndak salah itu dari sinopsis
gatau saya salah nginget Hehe

WUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA RunCry


jadi lebih jelas maknanyaaa!! Waai
arigatooooouuuu kuro san!!
terimakasih banyaakk
rep+ buat kuro san!! Thumb

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Post by OrangBego on Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:17 pm

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Post by Kuro vi Lolitannia on Thu Jun 10, 2010 3:01 pm

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